After presenting my animatic to the rest of the class I got mixed reviews, some said that they liked the idea however the ending was too slow and some said that there was too much dialogue included, below is a list of changes that have been suggested that I should change:
Less Dialogue
some of the drawings do not match the shot e.g. I have said c.u but drawn m.s
Make text more visible
make careful changes to dialogue
use photography rather than drawings as it shows a clearer picture
make the ending faster and more dramatic e.g. the three spies kicking down the door
rather than using a split screen idea, use a cross screen idea similar to 24 as it may be easier to film and maybe include a ticking clock
add a title sequence
I will take my piers feedback and try to encoporate this into my final piece of work I shall try to follow all bits of advice, however I may also change some scenes completely as well.
No comments:
Post a Comment