Sunday, November 28, 2010
Ancillary Text 1: 3 Short Film Poster Analysis
The three posters:
Ancillary Text 1: Film Poster Analysis And Initial Thoughts
Initial Thoughts:
Initially both posters present an idea of mystery around them. The film “Avatar’s” poster suggests that it is out of this world and is an occurrence that no one is familiar with, where as the “Purge” film poster suggests that something is instantly wrong by looking at the female’s facial expression. Both posters have dominating images presenting the idea that something is going to happen or is happening that is not necessarily a good thing.
My initial thoughts for my poster was to do a 24 (TV show) film style four box cut where in each box you would see a close up of the spies and the boss. I like the idea as it presents the idea of mystery around what connects these men to each other for people who haven’t heard of my idea.
Looking at the short film poster facial expression can tell a lot regardless of whether or not we can see the person’s full face. That is why I want to focus on the characters faces rather than bodies hence the reason for choosing a close up as I will be mainly focussing on the characters faces and shoulders.
Finally the thing I liked about the Avatar poster was the fact that it was not very detailed but very effective. It did not have a lot going on to tell you about the film however it does give enough to interest and persuade people to go and see it, I would also like to keep my poster simple as I believe that if too much is going on in the poster people will not want to go and see the film. I also want to include an interesting tagline to draw viewers in.
Ancillary Texts: A Starting Point
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Animatic Feedback:
After presenting my animatic to the rest of the class I got mixed reviews, some said that they liked the idea however the ending was too slow and some said that there was too much dialogue included, below is a list of changes that have been suggested that I should change:
Less Dialogue
some of the drawings do not match the shot e.g. I have said c.u but drawn m.s
Make text more visible
make careful changes to dialogue
use photography rather than drawings as it shows a clearer picture
make the ending faster and more dramatic e.g. the three spies kicking down the door
rather than using a split screen idea, use a cross screen idea similar to 24 as it may be easier to film and maybe include a ticking clock
add a title sequence
I will take my piers feedback and try to encoporate this into my final piece of work I shall try to follow all bits of advice, however I may also change some scenes completely as well.